Saffron Writes

Saffron Writes

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About Me

I am a Seattle-based writer and editor.

I love language and using it to distill down to its essence an idea, a product, a memory, or an experience. From the big picture to the details, I enjoy the whole process of getting to the heart of something and then sharing “the story.”

I specialize in the writing and editing of manuscripts for use within highly designed interactive layouts. And I am a creative storytelling marketer, skilled at the writing of Web content, catalog blurs, and package/back cover copy.

Contact me!

nancy@saffronwrites.com

206.743.6392

Look Book

The Publisher: SmartLab, Fall 2009
The Author: Nancy W. Cortelyou
The Numbers: 24-page, 1,000 word inspiration sketchbook
The Role: Writer

The secret of fashion is to surprise and never disappoint.

—Lord Lytton (Edward G. Bulwer-Lytton), novelist, politician, etc.

This activity sketchbook informs and inspires kids to design a clothing collection just like the pros. Starting with “what is a look book?”, it guides the reader how to think about a collection in regard to season, silhouettes, fabric, and style. It offers up ways to use practical tools such as mood boards, color stories, and inspirational prompts. Quotes from and about the design world serve as accessories to the whole outfit.

 

 

My mission: to learn, to collaborate, to inspire, to give back

Me on a Mission

Roman Gloves

Rates

Rates vary based on the type of work—writing or editing, copywriting or copy editing—as well as the scope of the project and its turnaround time. Please contact me for a sample rate sheet and/or an estimate for your unique project. Please note, there is flexibility and creativity within each.

Camino de Santiago: To Walk Far, Carry Less

The Publisher: Walk Far Media, Fall 2011
The Author: Jean-Christie Ashmore
The Numbers: 206-page, 40,000-word book
The Role: Proofreader

This self-published practical guide is devoted entirely to the subject of what to wear and what to carry on a Camino pilgrimage—with tips and advice on how to create a lightweight backpack so you can walk comfortably without carrying a burden on your back. A Camino journey can strengthen the body and refresh the soul. But to walk long distances every day you should carry as little as possible. This is the book to help you make the right choices for your pilgrimage written by a woman who knows. Ms. Ashmore has walked over 2,400 kilometers (about 1,500 miles) on Camino pilgrimage routes in France and Spain.

Star Wars: The Blueprints

The Publisher: Epic Ink, Fall 2011
The Author: J.W. Rinzler
The Numbers: 336-page, 70,000-word book-in-a-box
The Role: Proofreader

Using the Holocron, the Star Wars style guide of five gazillion entries, I carefully proofread this massive tome—a 30 lb. limited edition publication. Star Wars: The Blueprints showcases the blueprints and concept drawings behind the development of the Star Wars series and covers all six films. Highlights include the origins of the streets of Mos Eisley, the X-wing fighter, the cantina, and the Carbon Freezing Chamber. This is the first offering from new high-end publisher Epic Ink.

That’s the trouble with you readers. You know all the plots.

Joe Gillis on script readers in Sunset Boulevard

The Royals

The Publisher: Metro Books, Fall 2011
The Author: Leslie Carroll
The Numbers: 176-page, 35,000-word book
The Role: Proofreader

 

A whistle-stop history tour of the British Royal Family from Ivan the Terrible to young fresh William and Catherine, the Duke and Duchess of Cambridge. Worked with a small but perfectly formed style guide for this image-heavy expose and celebration of choices made by Britain’s famous and infamous heads of state.

Skyscrapers

The Publisher: Sterling Innovation, Fall 2011
The Author: Gretchen G. Bank
The Numbers: 48-page, 7,000-word book plus casewrap
The Role: Proofreader

I proofread this paper-craft kit containing a book detailing the construction and the historical significance of both the Empire State Building and the Chrysler Building—two iconic features in the New York City skyline. This good old-fashioned fun activity comes with instructions on how to build the large, paper-engineered models of these two notable skyscrapers.

Star Trek Vault

The Publisher: Abrams, Fall 2011
The Author: Scott Tipton
The Numbers: 128-page, 30,000-word book
The Role: Proofreader

Star Trek Vault is an image-heavy memorabilia book focusing on the TV shows and films within the Star Trek franchise. This removable document edition of the Vault series format required the use of a style guide and a three-day turnaround.

Snow Blind — Book Title or Way of Life?

So, this novel o’ mine had a name before it was born. Here’s the email genesis with character names inserted to protect the vulnerable. From here on out, “I” and “Astrid” are synonymous. At least until I figure out whether to go first or third person with this thing.

Astrid: Thanks for your wise words. I needed a mantra—I’m a dater, not a girlfriend. How did you get so smart?

Darcy: You’re hilarious – I’ve just been dating for eternity, that’s how! Of course it’s sooooo much easier to counsel my friends – if I’m actually in the situation I’m a total lunatic. So if I ever date anyone I like again, I shall need the favor returned. :)

Astrid: I’ll definitely return the favor. That’s how this friendship thing works. I guess it pays off to give good advice b/c it will come back around to you when you need it. But why are we so stupid when we’re in the middle of it…

Darcy: It’s like being snow blind. It’s all around you and you don’t know where to turn…

Who is Astrid Novak?

Here’s what you need to know about Astrid:

• She has red hair (but it’s constantly changing)
• She’s a creative soul but keeps things in boxes (literally and figuratively)
• She writes lists
• She wants the marriage/kids thing, but in an unconventional way
• She’s a window dresser—great at her job but tired of the scene
• She’d really like to find her calling; can’t find her creative niche
• She’s a late bloomer
• She lives in San Francisco

Flat Irony

Originally published as “Naturally Good Hair Days”
Ventura County Star, 2002

I was born with straight hair and spent my first few years happy that it would just lie flat rather than look like it was sprouting from the top of my head.

Don’t let the balloons fool you. Static electricity had nothing to do with this ‘do.

Bobbed hair and pageboys with bangs are the styles my school pictures show me sporting. In fact, I have fond memories of sitting on a stool out in the garage while my father trimmed those bangs. My favorite part was the post-trim high-powered stream of air from my Dad’s lips that removed all the little bits of no longer required growth.

Early on, I was aware of my hairstyle and one time decided that my Dad hadn’t performed his duty to my perfectionist standard. My bangs were crooked! So, at age six, I took scissors in hand and headed to the bathroom. It’s curious to me that there is an incredibly large photographic record of this phase where I had a very visible chunk of bangs missing (mirroring the missing front teeth at the time). Pretty! Did no one think to give the baby some baby bangs?

Inheriting not my father’s wavy hair but instead the straight-as-an-arrow hair of my mother, I gleaned the wisdom and trickery she had acquired through years of living the straight hair woes. Curls, I soon learned were best left for special occasions. My sister and I would take turns sitting under a huge hairdryer with strategically placed foam curlers (this was the ’70s) waiting for our transformation. In junior high, my girlfriends and I would schedule nights to sleep with our hair in curlers or braids and then arrive at school with our collective version of curly or crimped hair.

Hot rollers and curling irons came along just when we needed them—a wonderful time-saving discovery at the brink of becoming a teenager. No longer did we have to decide the night before what our hair would look like the following day. Female whimsy could be implemented in the morning. Granted, it was still the dark hours of that morning, but nonetheless it was progress.

At some point, I followed in my mother’s footsteps and was allowed to get “perms.”

The belief that people with naturally curly hair always had good hair days soon dissolved.

There was no telling what would happen to those curls during the night. I had just not been born with the skills to manage a gravity-defying mane.

It eventually occurred to me that my own straight hair was much more predictable. So, I went back to the straight bobs and pageboys of my youth (and instead experimented with changing my hair’s color rather than its texture, but that’s a different story).

Attempting to emulate the sleek ‘dos I saw in magazines or copy the way my hairdresser could blow dry my straight hair as flat as possible didn’t come easily. All those years of complaining that my hair was too flat seemed to be a big cyclical joke on me. Now I couldn’t get my hair flat enough. That is, until I discovered the FLAT IRON.

Those words should be written in gold—the hours it saves me, the results it helps me create. Yes, the flat iron has changed my life and I am dedicated to it until the end of time…or until styles change. I am able to get every single strand of hair as flat and sleek and stuck to my head as I desire.

I can easily shape it to curl under or flip up (so much better than those pink foamy curlers used to do). Hello Lady Miss Kier! I can look at Madonna or Sarah Jessica and know that their flat irons are hot and in heavy use. And better yet, I am finally able to copy their celebrity hair with a simple flick of the wrist. I have the technology!

The flat iron seemed to be an underground secret for a few years. I even had to arrange a clandestine purchase through my hairstylist to acquire a commercial grade one after a disappointing bout with a drugstore version. But now the secret is out. And, best of all, it’s an equal opportunity tool useful to those on the other side—the naturally curly haired who desire the naturally straight hair that the flat iron has helped me embrace.

The #10

Astrid thought, we’ve accomplished the impossible. We’ve remained friends above all. Through the breakup, other partners, fallback sex, and several cities, she and Will weren’t a couple anymore but definitely a couple of friends…still close.

And, if she were honest with herself, she still toyed with the idea it might still work out between them someday.

No plans to make it happen, but always that random thought of, what if Will…?

Winded from the hilly walk from her car to her apartment, she rested on the little bench across from the mailboxes to review the day’s pile. In it was a white #10 with his handwriting—so distinct. An occasional postcard with this same writing came every so often as did fun late night calls, but this #10 glowed with news. This #10 held information that would change their friendship forever. She knew before she opened it.

Hey, I’m getting married this summer, he wrote.

Ten years of what if morphed into tears.

Just A Little Bit

No matter how I’m feeling, I discover there is already a song (or a Sex and the City episode) that sums it up:

If I laugh just a little bit, maybe I can forget the chance that I didn’t have to know you and live in peace.

If I laugh just a little bit maybe I can forget the plans that I didn’t use to get you at home with me alone.

If I laugh just a little bit, maybe I can recall the way that I used to be before you and sleep at night and dream.

If I laugh, baby, if I laugh just a little bit…Intro to If I Laugh

At the end of your life, all the things you thought were periods, they turn out to be commas.

Matthew McConnaughy on the significance of punctuation

Monster Trucks

The Publisher: Scholastic Fairs, Fall 2011
The Author: Nancy W. Cortelyou
The Numbers: 48-page, 2,500 word image-heavy book for the five-year-old set
The Role: Writer

Happily researched this topic to discover it is all about the kids and it can turn even the biggest snob into a fan. The book features 24 monster trucks with snippets about each along with its driver and/or team as well as factoids on the industry.

 

 

Intro Text:
Sunday! Sunday! Sunday! Be there!!!

Pure excitement! That’s what it’s like to watch monster trucks in action. These heavies jump, fly, spin, and pogo! And if they don’t roll over before they’re finished, they give the crowd a high-speed victory donut!

Fashion Studio: Lights Camera Fashion!

Great things are done by a series of small things brought together.

—Vincent van Gogh, Artist

The Publisher: SmartLab, Spring 2004 (reprints: 10)
The Author: Sara W. Easterly
The Numbers: 32-page, 6,000-word book plus art kit for ages 7 and up
The Roles: Editor of the book; Writer of product cover copy

With fashion truisms such as, full skirts always make a big statement, and, most everyday outfits begin with jeans, Lights Camera Fashion! teaches kids the fine art of fashion illustration. I worked closely with the author to keep the book balanced between how-to and inspiration only. Includes professional fashion illustrations and designer quotes, as well as directions on how to make your own portfolio.

First created in 2004, the Fashion Studio kit remains in continual competition for one of the two top positions as best seller for the client. It has also easily translated into both smaller and more deluxe versions of itself, capturing a range of price points. And the light table has evolved into an LED light tablet.

Cupcake Decorating Studio: Sweet!

The Publisher: SmartLab, Spring 2009
The Authors: Jenna Land Free and Leslie Miller
The Numbers: 24-page, 3,000 word book plus art kit for ages 7 and up
The Roles: Editor of the book; Writer of product cover copy

Sweet! was a huge collaborative effort. I worked with both a writer and a topic expert to create a tasty book to help young bakers learn how to make art out of cake. Working closely with the cupcake goddesses, I edited down the project list to seven cupcake scenes without skimping on alternate recipes, frosting tips, and decorating how-tos. From fondant sampling to styling the photo shoot, everyone involved helped to whip this project into an award-winning best seller for the client.

Build the Titanic

The Publisher: Sterling Innovation, Fall 2011
The Author: Meghan Cleary
The Numbers: 48-page, 8,500-word book-plus kit for ages 14 and up
The Role: Proofreader

Proofread this publication of the Titanic’s tragic tale, written to commemorate the fateful voyage 100 years after its 1912 sinking. The book, suitable for ages 14 and up, recounts the ship’s history and construction, and accompanies a kit that contains all the materials needed to build the Titanic, or at least a three-foot-high model of the old girl.

How To Be A Rock Star

The Publisher: SmartLab and Scholastic Fairs, Fall 2006
The Author: Marty Jourard
The Numbers: 32-page, 8,000-word book plus toy for ages 8 and up
The Roles: Editor of the book; Writer of product cover copy

Hired local musician/writer with ‘80s heyday background to scribe this title. Co-titles Rock On! and How to be a Rock Star marked a first for the clients wherein the book didn’t directly support the toy. Instead created a stand-alone book that complemented its companion toy. Took a child’s desire to be a musician/rock star seriously with insiders information on everything from how to record an album to what to ask for on your tour rider.

A good song has words and music that work together to convey an emotion.

Squishy Human Body: Insides Out!

The Publisher: SmartLab, Fall 2006
The Author: Lucille M. Kayes
The Numbers: 32-page, 6,000-word book plus science kit for ages 8 and up
The Roles: Editor of the book; Writer of product cover copy

Check your vitals with a book that takes you on the journey of your life! The first human body model with squishy internal organs needed an equally premier book. All previous titles approached the kits from the standpoint of how to build or make something, not how to take it apart. The Squishy Human Body Model was to come with squishy parts intact.

Worked closely with the product developer and collaborated with a medical professional to cover all the systems and get the parts right. Following a bite of pizza became the hook that unified the product.

The average American eats about 46 slices of pizza per year, but pizza is popular around the globe.

Success made evident through several reprints and awards. And it spawned the Squishy series—The Amazing Squishy Brain (Spring 2010) and The Amazing Squishy T. rex (Fall 2012).

Copywriter for SmartLab web and marketing, 2009-2012.

The Link: www.smartlabtoys.com

Where toys and books collide!

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The Full Bouquet

The Publisher: SmartLab, Fall 2011
The Author: Nancy W. Cortelyou
The Numbers: 16-page, 3,000-word book plus art kit for ages 7 and up
The Role: Writer of the book and all supporting product copy

Design! Create! Decorate! was the call to action for this art kit featuring how to make five one-of-a-kind giant paper flowers for kids to personalize their room.

Sample text:

Re/Upcycle
It’s easy to give garbage a new life. Turn plastic soda bottles, newspaper, magazines, greeting cards, and used paper, ribbons, and bows into one-of-kind-posies. So before you take out the recycling, take a look at it using your artist’s eye. Anything in there that deserves a second chance?

Glow For It!

The Publisher: SmartLab, Fall 2011
The Author: Nancy W. Cortelyou
The Numbers: 24-page, 5,000-word book plus science kit for ages 7 and up
The Role: Writer of the book and all supporting product copy

Worked closely with product developer and designer on how to best showcase the twenty glowing, flowing, exploding projects needed to make Glow-in-the-Dark Lab more deluxe than the company’s best-selling backlisted title of a similar nature.

Red Heads and Brown Knees

Astrid knew her way around the beauty supply store and was set for her evening of maintenance, namely root touch-up. Being an old hand at this, all supplies were stocked. Tonight’s blend was a classic. Miss Clairol’s Red Red and Titian Gold, ready to mix. And, Homestyle Blondie Brownie Mix, ready to mix. She varied it a bit with the reds, sometimes Strawberry Delight or Truly Madly Deeply Red, but the blonde and the brown were strictly for dessert.

Astrid stumbled upon the hair color and brownie formula back in college. The two events were perfectly timed to each other. And she liked to think the smells canceled each other out.

The Ingredients:

• #40 Bleach, 2 oz. Bottle(s) of Hair Color
• Mixing Bottle, Applicator, Gloves
• Plastic Cap or Aluminum Foil
• Dedicated T-shirt and Towel
• Brownie Mix and probably Egg, Oil, and Water

The Choreography:

1. Turn on great music, extra loud.
2. Preheat oven according to chosen brownie mix.
3. Set out hair-coloring supplies to make sure you have everything.

It’s fun to experiment, but you don’t want to be walking out in public in your rainbow-of-hair-colors t-shirt and towel-wrapped head to grab a forgotten item, mid-process (speaking from experience).

4. Put on t-shirt.
5. Mix formula.
6. Apply hair color.
7. Wrap head in plastic cap or aluminum foil.

This creates heat which speeds up the process…the equivalent of going under the dryer at the hairdresser.

8. Set timer for hair…usually 30 minutes.
9. Remove gloves and prepare brownies. Get them in the oven.
10. Set timer for brownies…usually 40-45 minutes.

If you only have one timer, some rudimentary albeit mind-bongling math needs to take place at this step.

11. Let hair color process, then jump in the shower to rinse and condition.
12. Remove brownies from oven.
13. Dry hair and admire color while brownies cool.
14. Enjoy fresh look and baked goods with beverage of choice: milk, coffee, or red wine all recommended.

 

World’s Cutest Kittens in 3-D

The Publisher: Scholastic Fairs, Fall 2011
The Author: Nancy W. Cortelyou
The Numbers: 48-page, 3,500 word image-heavy book for the five-year-old set
The Role: Writer

I channeled the cat lovers of the world to find 60+ factoids about kittens to complement the book’s featured images remastered for 3-D viewing. This third in a series book comes with 3-D glasses (built into the front cover) that bring these adorable baby felines close enough to pet, virtually.

Sample Text:
Butterfly Catcher

All cats are hunters, and hunting lessons start when cats are kittens. A kitten may sit and wait for its prey. Or it may stalk and then run after it. A kitten will also hide and then pounce on another kitten, its owner’s feet, or anything else that moves. To a kitten, hunting and playing are the same thing.

A Working De-Lemon: A Biking Disaster

The Publisher: Self-published, 2012
The Author: Joan Wittler
The Numbers: 80-page, 18,000 word middle-grade novel
The Role: Writer of back cover copy (below); Editor of the book

Grace Erickson has one fear: babysitting! The last time didn’t go so well, and now she needs money to get her bike fixed. Without it, she’s stuck in a house with two annoying little brothers on a street with no friends and no excitement—and a constant stream of moms who want her to babysit their little monsters.

It’s a dilemma! Scratch that. It’s a de-lemon. So Grace takes her lemons and makes lemonade—but no money. Then things quickly go to the dogs when Stephie brainstorms their next business venture: walking the neighbor’s trio of pups.

Put your head together with Grace as she starts to think for herself and learns that best friends don’t have to lead identical live to remain BFFs.

A Working De-Lemon: A Biking Disaster

The Publisher: Self-published, 2012
The Author: Joan Wittler
The Numbers: 80-page, 18,000 word middle-grade novel
The Role: Editor of the book; Writer of back cover copy (below)

Grace Erickson has one fear: babysitting! The last time didn’t go so well, and now she needs money to get her bike fixed. Without it, she’s stuck in a house with two annoying little brothers on a street with no friends and no excitement—and a constant stream of moms who want her to babysit their little monsters.

It’s a dilemma! Scratch that. It’s a de-lemon. So Grace takes her lemons and makes lemonade—but no money. Then things quickly go to the dogs when Stephie brainstorms their next business venture: walking the neighbor’s trio of pups.

Put your head together with Grace as she starts to think for herself and learns that best friends don’t have to lead identical live to remain BFFs.